Amazing
It's a really excellent piece but I have to agree with the others on this. The song, for me at least, seems to reach a conclusion at about 1.12. Don't get me wrong the flow into the next section is very natural but with the end just fading out to nothing it almost feels like a new piece of music that breaks at the end.
Might be with the introduction of the pipes after 1.12. It feels like a different setting entirely, reminds me of the Last Samurai film.
Even with those noted it's still a beautiful piece. Well done.